First Draft of Script

12/12/2014

Mr. M

12/16/2014 03:51:09 am

Points 4 and 5 aren't strong enough. You have just one sound bite per point. The rest is ok, it's just not great. Definitely seems rushed and that's the case because of the way you guys did your interviews. Your VOs to bridge your points are very basic too.

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