Ben's Media Website
  • Home
  • Ben's Blog
  • Quarter Projects
    • First Quarter
    • Second Quarter
    • Third Quarter
    • Fourth Quarter
  • Inside Scoop

First Draft of Script

12/12/2014

1 Comment

 
1 Comment
Mr. M
12/16/2014 03:51:09 am

Points 4 and 5 aren't strong enough. You have just one sound bite per point. The rest is ok, it's just not great. Definitely seems rushed and that's the case because of the way you guys did your interviews. Your VOs to bridge your points are very basic too.

Reply



Leave a Reply.

    Author

    This is my project page.  I will post all of my project related work on this page

    Archives

    December 2014
    October 2014

    Categories

    All

    RSS Feed

Powered by Create your own unique website with customizable templates.